Miss Brandy at Blood Toy brought up another wrinkle in your manuscript:
What is the frequency of words appearing in your manuscript? What are the words you use all the time? Which words are uncommonly high frequency use, other than the usual conjunctions and prepositions and pronouns? I saw this elsewhere, and now we must examine it with laser focus. Why? Because you’re along for the ride.
I found this VBA script for Word… this one here. Copy the third one, that one, starts with “Sub WordFrequency()” and copy all the lines to “End Sub”.
Open Word and paste that thing into a macro.
View> Macros > View Macros, then Create one.
To run it, open your document and then View > Macros > View Macros, click on the name of your macro, click Run.
Here’s my top 10:
Oh. You see those? 116 was. 138 its. (To be fair, I don’t think my its are the unsupported variety that were beat up here in Marcus Trower’s post. However, I haven’t checked that yet. I’m still reeling from the passive voice corrections.)
Since Yuen is my protagonist, and she speaks fairly often, I’m okay with the 139 instances of her name. I wonder what my obsession with “in” is? Guess I’ll go look, now.